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Composer Toydora will analyze the common mistakes of beginner composers and explain how to avoid making amateur-like songs. To do this, he will intentionally make a song that sounds like an amateur, and then he will correct it until it becomes professional-level. Toydora spent four and a half hours correcting over 80 songs that were collected from listeners in a recent live broadcast. This video is a summary of the discoveries he made through the song correction live. Thank you again to everyone who submitted songs. ▽ "Song Correction LIVE" Archive ▽ • [Song Correction LIVE] Serious analysis and correction of viewers' songs ~ We will do all 84 songs in total Comments are welcome! If you have any questions, please register as a member or give us a tip. <Reference video> What is a "tonal melody"? → • [Music theory] Don't use anything other than "Do, Mi, So" in your melody! V7 is not necessary. ~ Practical... Learning "avoid notes" through the devil's accompaniment → • [Music theory] No matter how carefully you play the black keys, "Devil's accompaniment" will be a rubbish song ~ Av... ☆☆☆Additions and corrections☆☆☆ At 2:53, the drum pattern is described as "8 beats", but since the kick and snare are beating the rhythm with 16th notes, it may be appropriate to interpret it as 16 beats. However, since the hi-hat is beating with 8th notes, it can also be interpreted as 8 beats. Please note that the definitions of 8 beats and 16 beats are vague, so it is not possible to say for sure which one is which. Around 4:25, the melody in the third measure is written as "So", but this is a mistake for "Si". Around 7:00, the melody is "Do", but it is mistakenly written as "So". Around 8:50, the embroidery sound of the bass line is written as "Si", but this is an abbreviation of "Embroidery sound". Please note that this is not the name of the sound, "Si". 0:50 Listen to "Ultra-amateur music" 12:11 Edit to "amateur music" level 20:08 Edit to "sophisticated amateur music" level 23:20 Edit to "professional composer" level ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Composer's Toy Dragon → https://tomita-haruki.studio.site/ #musictheory #chordprogression #composition #compositiontheory