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Class 06: EVERYTHING ABOUT HOW TO MAKE AN INTRODUCTION TO THE ENEM ESSAY? Hey, my dears, how are you? Good morning, good afternoon and good evening!! Welcome to our sixth class of INTENSIVÃO 3.0. The Writing Intensive that will make you get more than 900+ points on this year's ENEM Essay even with very little time left!! There will be at least 30 classes, live sessions, exclusive materials and all of this for free on this channel!! So from today on you will officially be a POXINHA!! A POXALUNO!! 😍👏 And me, in case you don't know me, nice to meet you, I'm Ana Luiza, but you can call me Poxalulu!! I guarantee that I will make you get more than 900 points this year on the ENEM! And I say more, with me you won't need to worry about the topic 😉 ______________________________________________________________________________________________ 📚👉 Learn to Get More than 900 in the ENEM Essay on My Writing Platform, SUBSCRIBE NOW: https://www.poxalulu.com.br ✍👉 WRITING IN MOTION, Complete and Free Mini Course on ENEM Essay: • WRITING IN MOTION 🚀👉 Subscribe to My Youtube Channel: / poxalulu 💙👉 Join My Telegram Channel: https://t.me/poxaluluredacao 📳 👉 Follow me on Instagram: @poxalulu 🎶 👉 Follow me on TikTok: @poxalulu_ Hey, poxinhas, how are you? Today we will talk about how to write an introduction in the ENEM 2022 essay. Yes, the first paragraph of the essay. I will give you the Checklist on how to write an ENEM model introduction, that's right!! I will tell you step by step how to write an introduction in the ENEM essay. In today's class I will explain in detail how to write an introduction in the ENEM essay. First, you must present a legitimate sociocultural repertoire, relevant to the topic and with productive use. Prefer to follow this introduction model 👇 INTRODUCTION: SOCIOCULTURAL REPERTOIRE + CONTEXTUALIZATION OF THIS REPERTOIRE WITH THE PROBLEMATIZATION OF THE THEME UNDER ANALYSIS + THESIS DIVIDED INTO TWO ARGUMENTS + OUTCOME Legitimate repertoire means addressing your knowledge of the world Relevant to the theme, it is quite obvious, it needs to be related to the subject that is being proposed Productive use is very important to highlight the choice of repertoire, in addition to the second part of the introduction being to present the theme, the productive use of the repertoire helps you to do this. Well, as I said, after the repertoire, worry about presenting the contextualized and problematized theme, since every ENEM model essay theme is a problem (explicit or not). You must demonstrate that you understood/comprehended the theme well by contextualizing it with the repertoire used before, when starting your introduction, and thus demonstrating your text project as well. Last but not least, you must present an explicit THESIS in the introduction of your essay. The thesis, for ENEM, is nothing more than your point of view, but it must have an evident structure with the arguments that you intend to present in the other paragraphs. The thesis helps your text project a lot, because you present which subjects will be addressed in each of your developments, which you must then return to, in order. Think about it: this checklist, this step-by-step guide, is not mandatory, but it is the most frequently seen in essays that score 1000. I don't know if you know, but I read, analyze and compare all the essays that score 1000 that have been made available on the internet, precisely to bring you everything they have in common, everything that essays that score 1000 have in common. ❌ Keep Watching, I have separated the BEST VIDEOS so that you don't waste any more time, these are classes that will also HELP you: Understand the structure of the essay: • CLASS 02: UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO KNOW... Understand the 5 skills of the enem essay: • CLASS 03: EVERYTHING ABOUT THE 5 SKILLS... How to write an introduction: • Class 06: EVERYTHING ABOUT HOW TO DO AN INTRODUCTION... How to write a thesis: • Class 07: EVERYTHING ABOUT HOW TO DO A THESIS IN... How to do development: • Class 11: LEARN HOW TO DO A DEVELOPMENT... How to make a conclusion: • Class 16: HOW TO DO A CONCLUSION IN THE ESSAY... How to make an intervention proposal: • Class 17: LEARN HOW TO DO A PROPOSAL ... Thematic profile of the enem essay: • CLASS 01: EVERYTHING ABOUT THE PROFILE THEMATIC... Aaah, Take advantage and Tell Me Here in the Comments What Is Your Biggest Difficulty in Writing the Enem and What Type of Video Do You Want to See Here on My Youtube Channel, is that OK? 👇 I hope you like it, I made this video with a lot of love for you to ROCK the ENEM!! IT'S A GOAL IN THE ENEM!! 🚀 Oh my, Don't forget to leave your like, subscribe to my channel, activate the bells and share with all your friends and family! Deal?!! I WANT TO KNOW WHO SCORED A GOAL HERE ⚽⚽⚽⚽ A KISS!! 00:00 Presentation 02:09 Introduction paragraph checklist 03:41 Introduction paragraph structure 10:48 Present an explicit thesis in your Introduction paragraph