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???? Come study with me: https://www.clubedonoslen.com.br In today's video, Professor Glaucia and I bring you essential tips to help you finish your ENEM essay! Did you know that this paragraph is crucial to ensuring your maximum score in skill 5? This is where you need to propose the intervention, in a practical and detailed way, for the problem discussed throughout the text. But don't worry, I'll teach you how to do this clearly, objectively and, of course, in a way that impresses the correctors! ➡️Video contents: 0:00 Introduction 2:26 STRUCTURE of the concluding paragraph 5:05 What are the 5 elements of the Intervention Proposal 5:46 Action 7:11 Agent 7:36 Mode/Meaning 8:01 Effect 8:07 Detailing 8:40 How is Competency 5 assessed 9:31 EXAMPLE of a concluding paragraph 10:58 The easiest detailing in the world ✏️Concluding Paragraph In view of the above, combating generalized anxiety requires an integrated approach, which involves both investment in accessible psychological treatments and greater public awareness of the importance of mental health. In order to effectively address generalized anxiety, the Ministry of Health, the government sector responsible for administering and maintaining public health in Brazil, must expand access to psychological treatments in the SUS by creating specialized mental health centers in all regions of the country, which will also enable greater awareness among civil society about this disorder. In this way, it will be possible to address the challenges imposed by GAD and promote collective well-being. #enemessay #enem #enem2024 #studytips #argumentativedissertativetext #conclusionparagraph SUBSCRIBE and stay up to date with the news. CDN Store: https://loja.clubedonoslen.com.br/ Instagram: @professornoslen Twitter: @professornoslen Tiktok: @professornoslen Facebook: /professornoslen Be a member of this channel and help education in Brazil: / @professornoslen