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@dedaaladim and @anaraladim READING MY SISTER'S ESSAY: • READING MY SISTER'S ESSAY 980 VES... MY COURSES FOR THE ENEM: https://www.deboraaladim.com.br/cursos/ Instagram: / dedaaladim Twitter: / dedaaladim Facebook: / dedaaladim a video with writing tips with my sister! ✏️This video was reviewed by Rafaela Faria Vianna, a graduate in Letters from UFMG⚜️ ???? REVIEWER'S NOTE: At minute 13:44, Ana mentions the five elements of the proposal and describes them perfectly, but she confuses “action” with “mode”. In fact, the second element is not the mode, but the action. “Mode” is another word for the second element, the “means”. Thus, the five elements are: agent action means/mode detail purpose/effect